Despite the peace of mind
Delight filled piece of kind
Goodnight, here comes the grind
Shiny coins to transpire,
For the Roman Empire
Black market to inspire
Their greedy eyes on fire
I wish I had the answers
Reflect the stripper dancers
Time for the deathly cancers
Still have no form of answers
Do you want a taste?
My rocks are all placed
Spark up, not to waste
Just inhale with haste
Next hit is for the enemy
This is for the pack’s legacy
Their leader out like Kennedy
Assassin with the remedy
No matter what, the crown stays
King and queen, where is my raise
But all I get is the praise
Wondering when the dark days,
Finally decays
Nevertheless, the dark days will be gone.
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https://wp.me/p9kf5b-2s Please suggest me some edits
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For your site, I’d change some of the coloring, so it compliments each other if you understand what I mean by that. It’s a nice format, so no need to change that unless you wish to.
With your post, just reread over it, so you can catch some mistakes. It is annoying doing this, but at least you can catch some of your own mistakes. You could also have someone read it before posting. Another set of eyes can help you out a lot.
Cheers man!
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Change like what? I am sorry I did not understand what you tried to tell me. Please explain it just a bit more. Thanks for taking your time to check it out
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For instance your title of your site. “Beast !nside U”; I’d look for a color that compliments the background picture of the wolf. Perhaps black, white, etc. Play around with it until the title pops out and people would catch an eye on it.
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Yessir. I got it. I’ll try to make it better tomorrow. Thank you 🙂
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Any comments about my content? Both story and psychological stuff! On a scale of 1 to 10 please rate it
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I love your psychological content! Those topics interest me. A lot of my poems actually go into that, so if you want to check out more, then feel free. Your stories are also interesting. Both contents put together, a good strong 7-8 range, man!
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Oh I’ll try to write more about it then. I have a very busy life these days. I spend most of my time time at work. I started writing just 7-8 days ago. So I usually work at 11:30 pm to 1:00 am on my writing. I will try to upload 2 posts a day. And yes, I’d love to read your poems. Thank you
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Don’t stress yourself out about it. One post a day is totally fine. It’s all about the content, not the amount of posts. If that’s your time bracket to write, honestly I’d suggest taking your time with your posts. Let the topic saturate in your mind, which produces more ideas and different ways of writing the said topic. Once you have finished the post and reviewed it, then post it. Trust me, the content you write will be diverse and flow nicely.
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Oh okay. That’s completely true. I gave these posts some time, so they turned out to be better (most of the people say this lol) I hope I can write even better than this
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Keep that mindset! I’ll be looking for your future posts for sure.
Cheers!
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Thank you. And I’ll check out your blog tomorrow as it is 2:18 am right now and I’ve to wake up early for work lol. I’ll share my thoughts on your writing thank you again
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I don’t see this site on WordPress. It says it has been removed by the user. How do I get an access to your poems?
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That’s weird. Shouldn’t be doing that. Perhaps refresh your browser? Let me know if it continues doing this, I’ll get it fixed then.
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Yes sir. Please check it. I can’t open it it says “the site has been removed”
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I tried looking into it, but everyone else that has tried has gotten on the page. I’m not too sure what the problem is 🤔
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