Street – Response
Walking down a narrow and bumpy road
When you came across a small but wise looking toad
It went, “You’re near the dream, but watch out for the owed.”
With that said, the toad hoped away, leaving you in confusion, which definitely showed
~oOo~
You kept on strolling further down
Finally reaching some sign that read, Borrow Town
Your lips formed into a small, but truthful frown
Wondering why the town was named with such an oddful noun
~oOo~
Entering the town, you saw a horrifying sight
Destroyed houses, naked trees and dark shadows that gave little to no light
People started coming out on to the street and stumbling towards you, which made you scream out of fright
You automatically started to fight them, although felling uneasy because their looks seemed to be ready to smite
~oOo~
Exiting the town, you remembered the words that the toad had said
That must have been the owed, you thought and now you’re relieved that you are not dead
Thinking about the people, but instantly removing the thoughts, you continued down the road instead
But this time, you take your steps with a softer tread
~oOo~
Finally reaching the end of the road
You looked back and thought of the town and what had showed
The dream was definitly near, but you had to overcome the owed
Because if you didn’t, you would’ve been stuck and overflowed
A nice poem indeed. My encouragement.
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I love this poem, this is my favorite one out of all the ones you posted. Keep writing!
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great description, very dreamlike…
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I’m glad you liked it!
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